Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialog and to describe what we saw and how we felt.
I enjoyed doing the photos so that people can know what it is like.
I found it challenging to do the writing an making that really juicy so like describing my writing.
I found it challenging to do the writing an making that really juicy so like describing my writing.
My digital learning object shows about my holiday so you know what i did.
My digital learning object shows about my holiday so you know what i did.
Next time I would add more detail so it is good writing.
Next time I would add more detail so it is good writing.
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